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I loved her with words.

It was oft, and in many ways
That I loved her
With words

Yet she sought me as a sailor does stars
And just as often;
Her room, dark, tempted by
A sliver of moonlight
Is misty by her sighs.

Does she not recognize
The deliberate action of my words?
O, the heavens would have me harshly judged
For the Sundays spent searching
For inspiration
For the hundredth, milestone letter.

That I am a poet, she must loathe
Though I am thankful that her
Loathing loves me still.

I cannot deny
That I am a poet,

And I love her with words.

It was oft, and in many ways
That I lost sleep, writing under a shade of cloud,
Wandered the streets for inspiration,
A glimpse of poetry,

That I loved her.
©2006-2009 ~beramonde
:iconberamonde:

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It's just one of many ways.

Written on the 14th of May, 2006, at 12:43 AM.

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:icondragonspeaker:
I really like this. The part that really caught my mind was "Yet she sought me as a sailor does stars / And just as often;" because the image was so interesting. :heart:

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Leaving so soon? I was about to poison the tea.
:iconbolleh:
I never know what to write as a comment when I fav something. Most of the time I'm just dumbfounded with what other people create.

But faving poetry on dA is something I rarely do. For the reason I'm never totally captured by the words.
With you poem I'm just hoping to never forget them :)

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"I tired of waiting.
Wondering if you'd ever come around."
Taylor Swift, Love Story
:iconalittlerisque:
wow.
honestly, i am amazed.
this piece has a huge effect on me.
frankly, it is rare that i actually look for poems here on DA.
and in fact, this will be the first poem that i'm going to add to my favorites.

"Yet she sought me as a sailor does stars"
brilliant :clap:

i hope to see more from you.

and from one filipino to another, "mabuhay :D"
lol ^-^

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And she slurs, "no, no. just one more."
and one turns into four.
the fourth drink instinct is taking over.
:iconblack-panda-chan:
the words flow with eachother very nicly my friend was right your very good!

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" What do you see when you turn off the lights?"
"I don't know but i know that it's mine"

-Beatles

"That's it, time for some major RECON"

- Kingdom hearts 2 Hayner

XD
:iconsweetsoultaker:
wow...you will be my master...o_o...:worship:

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:typerhappy:

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