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I loved her with words.

It was oft, and in many ways
That I loved her
With words

Yet she sought me as a sailor does stars
And just as often;
Her room, dark, tempted by
A sliver of moonlight
Is misty by her sighs.

Does she not recognize
The deliberate action of my words?
O, the heavens would have me harshly judged
For the Sundays spent searching
For inspiration
For the hundredth, milestone letter.

That I am a poet, she must loathe
Though I am thankful that her
Loathing loves me still.

I cannot deny
That I am a poet,

And I love her with words.

It was oft, and in many ways
That I lost sleep, writing under a shade of cloud,
Wandered the streets for inspiration,
A glimpse of poetry,

That I loved her.
©2006-2009 ~beramonde
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It's just one of many ways.

Written on the 14th of May, 2006, at 12:43 AM.

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:iconneko-06:
:wow: this is great..... you pulled me right in! and it's easily visualized, andandand.... it was great because i think it's true with a lot of writers.
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this is a :+fav:

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:iconskyhunter18:
really romantic... :aww: I knew poets can be loved by someone if he/she was inspired by words... :writersblock: = :cuddle:

"If this is what fate has given me, I have no choice but to accept it..." - Joanna Angelfire :damphyr:
:iconskyhunter18:
ur welcome... :)

"If this is what fate has given me, I have no choice but to accept it..." - Joanna Angelfire :damphyr:
:icontoki88:
That was really nice. :)

No truer words.

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黄绮思
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simple yet beautiful. Such gentle words to make that someone be wooed.

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I think I see the Neruda influence. :)

Great wordplay. Bow.

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